The topic of the blog that I had chosen is sports. The presentation and Layout are rather plain and boring. It can be improved further by having a more attractive and colorful layout. I will give two marks for the Presentation and Layout as overall the layout still matches the theme sports but it appears busy and boring but it is quite easy to locate the information that the writer wanted to convey to the reader as there is a title followed by an explanation or answer.
As for the theme on sports, the graphics are related to the theme and there is also some sports merchandise in the blog. By doing so, it will enhance the readers’ enjoyment. Therefore, I have decided to give two marks for the Theme. For the Design and Graphics part, I will also give two marks to it as the Graphics are related to the theme/purpose of the site, and are of good quality. The author has tried to make the content of this Web site interesting to the people for whom it is intended. The content in it is short and precise and it does not beat around the bush and thus allowing the reader to know easily what is the message that the writer wanted to convey to his reader. And as for that, I will give three marks for that. There are only a few spelling or punctuation errors in the final draft; this will allow the writer to get three marks for this section. The writer also uses proper English but not singlish in his writing. The writer will be rewarded with three marks for the focus portion as the writer did not write out of point although the story wanders off at one point but the reader can still learn something about the topic. He tries to keep the story around his topic which is quite good.
For the paragraphing and sentence portion, the writer get four marks for that as his sentences and paragraphs are complete, well-constructed and of varied structure. He did not squeeze all the information in one paragraph; he paragraphs it every time he talks about a new thing. The language used in his story is mostly appropriate but the vocabulary is rather simple. He can use a wide variety of vocabulary in order to improve the vocabulary part and this will allow him to get three marks instead of only two marks. The sentences are precise and straight to the point and it sounds right so this will allow him to get two marks and not higher marks as some sentences are awkward and difficult to understand. The writer did a good job for having only a few errors in grammar or spelling and this will award him with four marks. He did not use any short forms to replace the words and he spell in full.
After all, I think that his blog is quite appropriate.

URL: http://georgiasports.blogspot.com/

~Si Ya~ XD